怎么样写好中考作文
那样,怎么样写好中考作文?阅卷老师喜欢哪种作文呢?
结合近几年的中考作文的评分标准与阅卷经验,给同学们汇总了作文拿高分的方法,供大伙参考。
1、结构要明确
结构明确这点真的非常重要,大家都了解,阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文,而明确的结构,会让阅卷老师一清二楚,自然就会喜欢你的作文。
什么结构好呢?那就是三段式。
第一段要单刀直入,直接拿出主题。给大伙举例,譬如,写我的母亲,第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确我们的看法。
第二段就要说,她为何是一个好母亲。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出母亲的优点。
第三段得出结论。大伙可以发表我们的看法,也可以提出建议和期望。如,I love my mother. I love my family!
2、时态要准确
英语作文除去结构,还有一个是阅卷老师最敏锐的,那就是时态,这也是一篇作文是不是得高分的重点。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再依据内容需要,现确定事情是过去已经发生还是将来马上发生,譬如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写常常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般目前时;对于将来的憧憬要用一般以后时;过去的事情对目前导致的影响或过去延续到目前的情况都用目前完成时。绝对不能乱用乱配。
3、短语运用要灵活
同学们在写作文的时候,要尽可能用有把握的词,防止非必须的失分。当然,定语从句、宾语从句等句型,在重点的时候用上一两个,会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在不少简单又能表达不少意思的短语。这类短语的运用可以使作文愈加原汁原味。
还有对关联词的用法,如first of all,secondly,finally,last,so that,in order that,not...but,not only...but also等。还可以用高级点的如,in a word,all in all (表示总结的),but,yet,however(表示转折)等。
经验的阅卷老师非常在乎这类逻辑连接词,由于这类词体现了整个文章的思路。
4、写全要素
近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多,也就是说写作内容几乎都有要素提示,确切地说就是给出写作提纲,一般都是3 ~ 5个提示点,这种作文,同学们肯定记住不要逐字翻译,但提示点需要在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好,假如缺少了要素就会扣分的。所以要素也就是文章的第二段内容,同学们要把提示点写全,然后围绕提示点充分发挥,丰富自己所写的内容。
5、书写要认真
这一点同学们需要高度看重,作文的书写必须要维持规范整洁,同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到5分的差距。
给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写,最简单的得分点就是大家的认真书写。工整好看的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情,在扣分时自然会手下留情。
大伙切记不要涂改,在状况允许的首要条件下可以打些草稿。防止非必须的丢分。
好看的字体是可以练出来的,只须大伙在心里注意了我们的书写,都会写得非常不错。
作文评分标准
中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分(总分20分):
(一)内容(满分8)
7-8分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达了解、完整。
5-6分:内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本了解、但不够完整。
2-4分:内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够了解、有的离题。
0-1分:文不对题,表达不清。
(二)语言(满分8)
词数:每少5个单词扣0.5分,以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写:每处错误扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数。
语法:每处错误扣0.5分,同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣0.5分,但扣分总和低于1分。
(三)组织结构(满分4)
内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词语和句型句式运用适合,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3-4分。
内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误;词语和句型句式运用适合,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给2分。
通常情况下,内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
内容和语言在15分以下者,如文中有值得一定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
通篇句型句式单1、词语贫乏者,即便无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分。
分类作文提纲
1、活动介绍类
首段:
Im pleased to know that youre greatly interested in ... ,so Id like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.
Its my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.
Its time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.
主体段:
1.时间地址:The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 oclock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.
2.内容:
主题句:There will be various meaningful activities included in it.
要素:First of all,You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...
After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...
At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...
尾段:
Thats all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .
Thats all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.
2、写人叙事类
首段:
朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.
爸爸妈妈:If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .
老师:In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.
主体段:
1.外貌:... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.
2.性格:...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.
3.喜好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.
4.事例:
(1)Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.
(2)My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.
(3)Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.
尾段:
As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.
Now I understand my fathers love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.
3、咨询建议类
首段:
Im sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Dont worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I d like to share with you.
主体段:
1.主题句:Actually,if you are careful, youll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.
2.要素:
First and foremost,Its +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ... .So that...
In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...
Whats more,you had betterdo ... ,because ...
Last but not least,I suggest youdo ... ,from which,youre able to do ...
尾段:
With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
4、看法怎么看类
首段:
With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ... is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot TOPic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.
主体段:
On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ... .Second, ... .Last, ... .
On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ... .
尾段:
As far as Im concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not a n exception.As long as we treat ... properly,it will be of great help.
中考作文经典词句
1、常见的名言警句
1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩.
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友.
3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.
4. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马.
5. Every man has his weak side. 每人都有缺点?
6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?
7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。
8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就好似生命中没太阳。
9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。
10. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。
11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
12. Bad news has wings. 好事不外出,坏事传千里。
13. You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. 你需要相信自己,这是成功的重点。
14. Dont judge a man by his looks. 不能貌取人。
2、常用过渡语
1. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。
2. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。
3. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side ofon the other side of, at the foot/TOP/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等.
4. 表因果的过渡语:for, since,as,because of, thus, so, as a result 等.
5. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of等。
6. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等。
7. 表推进的过渡语:on one hand on the other hand, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not onlybut also, besides, in addition,furthermore, whats more, moreover等.
8. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all,above all等.
3、常用句型
1.重点句型
1). Its adj for sb to do 做对某人来讲
2). sothat这样 以至于 tooto do 太 而不可以 suchthat这样 以至于
3). notuntil 直到才
例: I didnt go to bed until my mother came back.
4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子是什么原因
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.
5). That is why + 句子 那是是什么原因
6). That is because + 句子 那是由于
7). It is said that + 句子 据了解 It is reported that + 句子 据报道
8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问
9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫无疑问
10). There is no need to do不必做
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
2. 提建议
had betterdo 最容易做
Its +adj./n. of/for sb. to do
I suggest that youdo 我建议你做
be supposed to do 应该做
If I were you, I would do我如果你的话,我会做
Dont forget to do=Remember to do...
Why not do / why dont you do? 为何不
How about / what about doing 如何?
3. 表示喜欢和有兴趣
like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜欢做
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁可做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing ... 有兴趣
4. .努力做
try to do努力做 try ones best to do= do ones best to do 全力以赴做
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做
do what sb canto do 尽力做
spare no effort to do 尽心竭力的做
do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做
5. 计划做 / 计划做
intend / plan to do 计划做 be going to do 计划/计划做
decide to do 决订做 determine to do决订做
make up ones mind to do下定决心做
6. 表示想/期望
want to do = would like to do 想做
hope/wish to do 期望做 expect to do 期待着做
desire to do=have a great desire to do
7. 只加doing作宾语的动词
finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing
固定搭配
look forward to doing 盼望做keep on doing 坚持做dream of doing 梦想做
cant help doing 不由自主地做 keep / sTOP / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做
be busydoing be busy with + 名词 忙于做
spend time / money doing spend time / money on + 名词 花浪费时间间做
have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得高兴
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