低碳生活英语作文
构思点拨
图片中一个小孩子，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依旧在播放，这个时候母亲走过来帮他关了电视，还责备他为何一直忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉大家要节省用电。但，大家假如从更宏观，更深层次的角度去考虑，这幅图正是在告诉大家一个时尚的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在主张一种低碳环保的生活方法。因此本文的内容和结构可如下：
第一段：描述图画;第二段：列举现象，剖析影响;第三段：建议手段，展望将来。
思维拓展
环保话题，比如节省能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳的角度入手展开写作。
高分范本
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of low carbon lifeto reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
佳作妙译
如上图生动地展示，一个小孩子正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这个时候母亲走过来帮他关了电视，责怪小孩子又忘了关电视。
这种现象在大家的日常随处可见。不少人习惯于干什么事情都开着电视，事实上并不看。这种习惯会致使电力和能源的浪费，这会致使碳排放。这偏离了时尚的低碳生活的理念。低碳生活是指，降低碳，特别是二氧化碳的排放，以保护环境，达成可持续进步。依据统计数据，假如大家天天把开电视的时间降低一小时，则每一个月可以降低4. 17千克的碳排放量。
作为对地球负责任的管理者，大家需要在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方法，从日常的每一个细节开始。大家需要要改变为了获得短期的迅速经济进步，牺牲长期的环境健康的做法，转向进步绿色经济、循环经济与低碳经济。所有这类有效的手段可以帮助大家达成社会进步与自然有序进步之间的和谐。
名师点评
① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。soundly and comfortably这种副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。
② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
该句主干结构是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。
这个句型的意思是：一件事情正在发生，忽然发生了另一件事。
with the television on： with 引导的随着结构，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成随着状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。
blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again，这句是母亲关电视的随着动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。
图画描述这句，写得越精彩越好，这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。
③ are used to doing: 习惯于做某事，用短语表达，地道准确。
④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是2005年考试真题阅读中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的规范到位。
一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。
历年考试试题是一座巨大的宝库，大家必须要充分借助，举一反三。
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